toad2000's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ruy the ninja]

Ruy or Ryu?

This is good, but you have some friggin' huge spelling errors. For instance, what the heck is a "wilage"? Also, his name seems to change between Ryu and Ruy.

[ne Plus Ultra: Bette Noir]

Beyond words.

I actually watched that whole damn thing and it definitely had the WTF factor about it. I liked Macgyver until the later seasons and found the pixellated Richard Dean Anderson intriguing. My suggestion is to tighten the pacing a lot. This runs way too long.

[Grandma & Pals]

Submit it when it's done

I hate previews almost more than I hate sprite animations. I would say wait until it is finished to submit it, but I would strongly advise rethinking this whole thing and doing something else. There are far too many Mario sprite animaitons on Newgrounds. It's time to do something else. But if you are going to go ahead and finish this, actually finish it! Don't submit a crappy preview.

[PICONJO: Berserk 2]

Torn

I'm torn between my desire to see this blammed and my desire for a protection point. I chose the high road. Zero.

[Stinky Chicken - Sleep]

Great but...

I was really impressed by the style of this, by how cinematic it looked and how cool the animation blended with the live action.

But...

The writing sucks. It was just inane and interminable. I didn't find it at all funny and/or interesting. Merely having a surreal situation and character does not translate to good comedy. I am, of course assuming you were going for comedy, which I cannot say for certain because it wasn't funny. But you've committed the double crime of making it pointless and monotonous.

Hopefully future installments might have a bit more of a direction behind it.

stinky-chicken responds:

thanks, I've been working out and I think my buts come a long way

[Barney Poop 14]

Why?

If you are going to take a bad idea and make it into a movie, at least do it right. Provide a backstory or context for this kiss, have some cheesy dialogue. Maybe you might want to cut to close ups of their eyes, or have Bush blush, or even blink. Hell, I'd even settle for Bush doing the Numa Dance. You clearly put no effort into this at all, and worse yet, it is a ripoff of an already bad idea.

W00tPWNER responds:

We put tons of effort into it, and if we added cheesy text and a backstory, no one would like it. People want to get strait to the action!